Rough Cut

Here is the rough cut for our music video. We feel pleased with our first edited video but definitely feel that there are changes and improvements that can be made.
We are going to do a feedback group with people who match our target audience demographic in order to see how they react and receive the video. We hope that the video will allow us to understand our target audience more. We hope to gather comments and suggestions that will allow us to make improvements so our video that will please and appeal to our target audience.
These are the questions we are going to ask.

Why do you think this music video is appropriate for our genre?

Do you feel you can relate with the artist and why?

Do you think the video appeals to our target audience? Why?

Are there any improvements that can be made?

Any other suggestions or comments?

We have based the questions on target audience and genre as we really want our music video to suit these aspects. We have also based questions on ideas and suggestions the target audience group may have as this may be a great opportunity to hear some really original ideas. Developing some of these ideas and comments will also add to the unified tone and the strong audience/ artist relationship we are trying to create.